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Zoovy stared at the approaching ship without uttering a word. She saw the crew were all set to fight. Her mind was clear, this was her chance to take the revenge she had planned for. She didn’t turn around when Caleb came and stood right behind her. With a false hope he tried to convince his life for the last time “Zoovy this is not your fight, I will handle this”. Caleb moved his hand in space helplessly seeing his determined wife. He touched her shoulder and said “ok, I will let you fight in my way. You will wait here till I give you signal”. Zoovy chuckled and said “you cant touch those 3 cannibals. They are mine”. Caleb saw the pain in her eyes and he knew how he can set his wife free from her nightmares.

Caleb and his men attacked his uncle’s ship. Caleb knew he can defeat them in fraction of second if only Zoovy was not there with him. Her presence on the ship worried him. He killed most of the men. He wounded his uncle and captivated him with his remaining men. Few of his uncle’s men flew when they realised that they are defeated. With whales around Caleb knew it they will never make it to the shores. He told his men to guard prisoners then he signalled for his wife. Caleb’s heart started to beat fast as he saw his wife scanning the prisoners thoroughly. His prisoners laughed and said “oh, What we have here???Same lass but fully clothed”. Then they all laughed. One of his uncle’s men said “she looks pretty without those clothes. I will be honoured if I get the chance to undress her”. Caleb slapped and walked towards Zoovy. He said “just tell me who laid their filthu hands on you I will handle this, they are filthy you cant stand this. You don’t have to do this trust me, I will take your revenge”. Zoovy was touched seeing her husband’s concern for her. She touched his arm and said “no Caleb, its my fight and only mine”.

She pointed out at the three prisoners and ordered to release them. Caleb stood there watching the emotions play on his wife’s face. He held his sword more tightly. He realised even Rall was clutching his sword more tightly and was praying silently. He knew he cant let anyone harm his wife.

He saw the three huge prisoners and his blood boiled. How he wanted to strangle them to death with his bare hand. He waited for Zoovy to act. They laughed at Zoovy and said “wowo, you fight lass? Why you want to fight lass? Because we killed your old man and dog or because we fucked you again and again?” All three laughed in unison. Zoovy’s eyes filled with tears and anger. She said with her steady voice “Na bastard because you don’t have right to live” .Saying that she swung her sword at them. They were huge and well built. They laughed and surrounded Zoovy. Caleb stood there watching his wife. All he wanted was a signal from his wife.

Zoovy swung the sword again and easily they escaped. Zoovy realised she have to plan to take those three cannibals down. She cornered one guy and swung the sword while with other hand she threw the dragger at other man’s leg. The man cried and held his leg with pain. She then focussed on remaining two men. She had few seconds before the wounded man gets up. She jumped and swung the sword with all her might wounding other man on his arm. Two down and one still standing Zoovy held her sword more tightly. She knew she had very less time. She took the gun which Caleb’s father gifted her and fired at the man in front of her on his leg. All three men down she took a minute to relax. She looked at Caleb with a smile on her face which clearly said “I didn’t fail myself”. She failed to see the man advancing towards her with the dragger. The man succeeded in wounding her back. She cried with pain and swung the sword at the man arm. She wounded his left arm badly and he fell to the floor. She then pull the dragger from his leg and kept in its place. She then turned towards other two who were trying to get up. She fired the bullet the gun at the second man’s groin and said “sorry about that”. She stood there watching the third man. He stood and said “you bitch, I will kill you..”.. Before he could complete she aimed her dragger at his left eye. His cry made it clear that dragger reached its destination.  She then walked towards the man who was holding his eyes and pushed the dragger deep inside. The man screamed with pain. Then she chopped his fingers and threw in water. Deck was flooded with the blood.

Caleb held his breath seeing his wife bleeding. She fell to the ground. Caleb was next to her holding her. She said “didn’t I fight well Caleb?”  Caleb said “don’t talk. Just lay here”. Rall was seeing her with teary eyes. Caleb signalled Rall and he moved to his place and held zoovy head in his arms. Caleb walked towards the three men lying on the floor and kicked one hard on his face. He cried with pain. He then opened his stomach with his sword and took out his intestine and tied it around his neck and pushed him into water. Second man started crying seeing Caleb advancing towards him. He knew he doesn’t have a chance. Before Caleb could reach him he ran towards the edge of the deck and jumped into the water. Before He could reach the water he hit his head to the side board and his skull opened. When Caleb walked towards the third man he stopped staring at him. There was no moment other than his unsteady breath. He dragged him and hit his head to the railing and then pushed him in water. He then stood there watching the scatted body parts and blood stream. His uncle chucked and said “how brutally you killed them only because they fucked this bitch!” Caleb slapped his uncle hard on his face and said “Careful what you say, she is my wife. Its time you learn how to respect women”. Saying that he kicked hard on old man’s stomach. He spit on Caleb’s face and said “over my dead body”.  Caleb kicked him till he was unconscious.

He walked towards his wife who was trying to keep her eyes open. Caleb knelt in front of her and said “you know how much I love you, don’t you?”. Zoovy smiled and touched his face with trembling finger and said with drowsy voice “I know Caleb but I love you more and more…”.  She lay in Ralls arm while Caleb ordered his men to get some bandage and needle. Today he was going to save his wife no matter what. He was ready to fight with death if necessary.

(For god sake tell me hows the story???? with no comments  and no feed back i feel story suck big time…….)

Sanie put on her glares and looked out of the window. She looked at her brother whose eyes were focused on the road. Sanie didn’t had the courage to break the silence. It was after one week Sanie decided that she will go back to London. Her dad didn’t say much other than nodding his head. She begged him to forgive her for what she has done. His words were still pricking her like thrones “One word was enough. I thought we were best friend and you loved me. Looks like you don’t love me anymore”. Sanies mother had said “hope you know what you are doing!!!”.

Sanie looked at her bother again. She couldn’t take it anymore and broke the silence “I know what I did was wrong but….i didn’t had any choice”. Her brother kept his eyes on the road and said “don’t say that, not now. You had choice Sanie, you had”. He stopped the car in front of the airport. He helped Sanie with the luggage and said “Think twice before you do any silly mistake”. He hugged her and before she could say anything he was gone.

Left alone Sanie thought “This is what happened if a gal loves a guy truly. Parents fail to understand her and the guy whom she loved dumps her”. Sanie put her head phone and walked .


As soon as Sanie reached London first thing did is to check Jakes apartment. As she expected it was empty. She wanted some answers for her questions from him. It was then Sanie realized She never going to get her answers. She tried to forget her past and forget the dark shadow of Jake. She still didn’t feel like taking of the chain given by Jake.

She didn’t realize how the time went as she was busy with her work. Whenever Jakes memory used to haunt her she used go for a smoke. It didn’t take her long to become an expert smoker.

Few times she even visited the pub in which Jakes used to sing with a false hope that she will find him. But to her bad luck she couldn’t find anything.

One Friday her team decided to go to a pub on northern side.  She ordered for Margarita sitting on the bat stool. She was watching merry crowd sipping her drink. Most of the people were dancing for the rock music. Her team members dragged her to the dance floor. She started moving her body in a rhythm. When she was tired she went back to her seat sat there watching the people bending their knees and moving their body. It very late and people were leaving when a guy came with a guitar and started playing the song

Storm coming people run I don’t care

Hail stones fall people run, still I don’t care

I rather die than be alone

Without you by side

Wonder how you are

Without me by your side

My lips miss your lips

Remembering the last kiss

How I wanted to stop you

When you walked never looking back

My fingers itch to play with your hair

How I long to be in your arms

Close to your heart, Oh Yeah I still love you

You make me complete

I am nothing without you

My heart beats fast remembering those days

You laying your head on my shoulder

I am alive because of the memories

How happy I was then with you

How miserable I am now without you


Sanie couldn’t sat on the chair. Her eyes were filled with tears. Slowly she stared walking towards the stage where the young guy was singing. As the lights were dim she couldn’t see his face. People around were statue listening to the love song. She was few towards away from the stage when lights came on and she saw the singers face. She couldn’t believe her eyes. It was Jake who was singing. When he stopped people showed their appreciation clapping their hands and whistling. Sanie stood there watching him. He looked breath taking as usual. With that gotty and full shaved head he was looking handsome than ever. It was then his eyes fell on her. Her cheeks were wet with her tears. His face was a mask of shadow. They stood there staring at each other talking with eyes. Its then one gal came running hugged Jake and kissed on cheek. Sanie stood there without blinking her eyes. Its then slowly she removed her chain around her neck and throwed at Jake and walked away. She escaped from the pub un-noticed as people were still cheering Jake. Jake bent and took the chain in his hand and looked at the way Sanie went.

Sanie was boiling when she realized where she was. She walked and walked. When she saw a bar at the far end she walked and ordered for hot drinks. She doesn’t even have a count how many she had. When she closed her eyes with her head banging she said “Bas…” before could complete the word she passed out.


When Sanie opened her eyes in strange place first thing she did was to check her clothes. She breathed  when she realized she is still wearing her clothes. Then slowly she recalled the incident. She sat on the couch and scanned the surroundings. When her brain was trying to recognize the place , the door opened and Jake came. Sanie stared at him. Sanie picked her bag lying beside the couch and stood. She walked to the door then she came back remembering something. She stood in front of Jake. Before he could say something she slapped him across his face twice and then she was gone.She felt words are unnecessary


Nothing bad than being in your ex-boyfriends house when he is dating someone. Sanie cursed her fate. She smiled remembering her outburst at Jake. If she had knife she would have stabbed several times. She touched her empty neck. She was bit amazed when she realized she did miss the chain. She told herself “its time you move on, he doesn’t deserve you”.


Next day morning Sanie was crossing the road when a speeding car came and hit her.  She was lying down on the road when the friver stopped the car and came out. Before drifting to sleep Sanie saw the face which she hated the most and said “There’s nothing left in me to hurt me Jake. Let me die in peace”. With that she closed her eyes



(What is happening?Finally SnL started writing happy ending???!!!!!)